Writing clues over a long period has pluses and negatives. On the plus side, a mental formula develops that helps get to a reasonable clue in the most efficient way. Basically, you get better at writing them the more you do them. You learn how to achieve wordplay goals through experience, like creating a plural definition from a wordplay that has a singular feel. On the negative side, there are only so many new things out there, so trying to be constantly fresh can be draining. One thing I have learnt though, is that if I choose my grid words smartly, then writing a reasonable clue shouldn’t be very hard, as a cluing approach has already be thought through. Better, if a word does turn out to be difficult to clue, time and effort WILL tease a decent clue loose. In fact, I’d go further to say that EVERY reasonable word or phrase pre-selected in a grid has a really good clue lurking, just waiting to be found, no matter how futile the process can sometimes seem.
In this crossword, the last word to be clued was 12-across: LOUNGE. Selected on the basis of O inside LUNGE and the multiple word forms of LOUNGE, it seemed no different to most of the words in the crossword from a cluing perspective, however, I just couldn’t tie a wordplay with a definition to my satisfaction, no matter how hard I tried. Setters short on time and motivation just butt the two together anyhow, making no effort to disguise the link. Such clues are easy to solve as the definition stands out so much that the wordplay plays a minor, or sometimes, no role.
Experience showed that I could clue LOUNGE well – the clue was there, I just had to find it. I persisted and pored over my references until a breakthrough: LOUNGE = LIE ABOUT – finally a term I could work with, one that has many meanings and a built-in linker. Now for LUNGE. Nothing easy here that goes well with the definition (I wanted something shady to emphasise the “lie” part of the definition) until I read about a move in fencing – ah, that’s illegal in the right context: how can I use it? I worked with “fencing action” and “fencing move” and almost settled there, but added “charge” after further reading of the LUNGE definition. Perfect. Now to put the O in there. Not hard in the end, although it didn’t come to me straight away. So there you have it, a word I found difficult to clue, but with time and effort and the belief that a good clue was there that just needed teasing out, a good outcome was achieved.
Lie about fencing charge, admitting nothing (6)
Across | Answers and Clues | Explanations |
1 | BUMBLED | |
Vagrant lost blood and proceeded unsteadily (7) | BUM + BLED | |
5 | BESIDES | |
One quarter of bird seed is spoilt in any case (7) | (B)IRD + anagram of SEED IS | |
9 | SOUND | |
Secure channel (5) | Double Definition | |
10 | SENTENCED | |
Condemned ten caught with ecstasy on board ship (9) | (TEN + C + E) inside SEND | |
11 | IN THEORY | |
Representation of irony probed by article on paper (2,6) | THE inside anagram of IRONY | |
12 | LOUNGE | |
Lie about fencing charge, admitting nothing (6) | LUNGE outside O | |
14 | EVIL | |
Beheaded scoundrel having a destructive influence (4) | D(EVIL) | |
15 | CARNIVAL | |
Four involved in erotic merrymaking (8) | IV inside CARNAL | |
18 | SCARPERS | |
Person not holding on following disfigurement, heads for the hills (8) | (PERSON minus ON) after SCAR | |
19 | KITE | |
Wind-up toy? (4) | Cryptc Definition | |
22 | TWINGE | |
Couple together dealt with, for example, back pain (6) | TWIN + (EG reversed) | |
23 | CARAPACE | |
Fish expert brought around a part of a crab (8) | (CARP + ACE) outside A | |
25 | AMBITIOUS | |
Driving range promises to pay back money (9) | AMBIT + IOUS | |
26 | TRIER | |
Judge, say, is right inside bank (5) | R inside TIER | |
27 | ERRANDS | |
Make a mistake and start to schedule short trips (7) | ERR + AND + (S)CHEDULE | |
28 | SCRUNCH | |
Squash clubs administered in school (7) | RUN inside SCH | |
Down | Answers and Clues | Explanations |
1 | BASSINET | |
Speculate about clown in bed (8) | BET outside (ASS + IN) | |
2 | MOUNTAIN CLIMBER | |
Odd man out in clubs able to move freely with person heading to summit (8,7) | Anagram of MAN OUT + IN + C + LIMBER | |
3 | LODGER | |
Paying guest ogled reformed worker’s backside (6) | Anagram of OGLED + WORKE(R) | |
4 | DISTRACTED | |
Passed around small region miles away (10) | DIED outside (S + TRACT) | |
5 | BEND | |
Twist pole concreted into foundation (4) | N(orth) inside BED | |
6 | STEP ON IT | |
Hurry preparation for set point (4,2,2) | Anagram of SET POINT | |
7 | DECONTAMINATION | |
Mend coat ruined by one lot of people cleaning (15) | Anagram of MEND COAT + I + NATION | |
8 | SADDEN | |
Make blue snake largely tin-plated? (6) | (ADDE)R inside SN | |
13 | TRESPASSES | |
Very old-fashioned prioress ultimately sins (10) | TRES + PASSE + PRIORES(S) | |
16 | BRIGHTEN | |
Clear up claim held by a Scottish high-rise? (8) | RIGHT inside BEN | |
17 | RESEARCH | |
Investigate careers not normally offered by hospital (8) | Anagram of CAREERS + H | |
20 | AT EASE | |
A guy in a relaxed frame of mind (2,4) | A + TEASE | |
21 | CANTOR | |
Leader of a singing group isn’t able to tour regularly (6) | CANT + tOuR | |
24 | BOYS | |
Children slip away from broadcast, possibly (4) | Anagram of POSSIBLY minus SLIP |
will never be able to look at answers like 20d again
without remembering The Two Ronnies & the ……. fourc ‘andles
& David I opted for sons in 24d – but I see there is no charade indicator
I went ……. broadcast – airs – heirs – sons. I’ll take a point anyway!
Thanks for the story behind the clue to lounge. Once the sport ‘fencing’ came to mind rather than the border to a field then the answer popped out. That’s what I love about the crosswords – the elegance of the clues. Once you have the answer all the information you needed to solve it is there with nothing superfluous.
24 down had me stumped but now with the solution in front of me – it is so obvious. I wanted to put in TOTS meaning children. Using it as an anagram of STOT – to bounce a ball or describing the way some African antelope jump or skip or slip away from their predators. A very long bow and I was not using the second part of the clue.
Loved how you arrived at the clue for lounge. Brilliant. Everything tied in.