When describing straight and cryptic crosswords to new solvers, I point out that a well-written cryptic crossword is a straight crossword plus wordplay, that is, if you scrub the wordplay from each cryptic clue, you should end up with a bunch of definitions, which is effectively a straight crossword. This only works if a setter provides accurate definitions, ones that can stand on their own two feet and match exactly with the answers. For me, a correct definition in a clue is paramount, and the least that a solver should expect. A setter may include deception in the wordplay, or deception in how the wordplay joins the definition, but in all cases a solver must have the assurance that their answer at least matches what they believe to be the definition. It’s for this reason I’m not a fan of an example of the answer being used as a definition, for example, CAT defining PET or HUMBUG defining SWEET. The other way round is fine, of course, but as there are so many things that CAT could be (besides a PET) and those things to some extent are arbitary, it doesn’t properly do its job as a definition.
The English language is full of wrinkles and society likes to ignore history and iron them out wherever it can. One such area is gender, where there are specific words representing the female and male forms. I don’t see anything wrong with killing two birds with one word-based stone, and using a female form, for example, to tell the reader or listener an occupation and sex at the same time. These words aren’t always appropriate but still have a place in language and are dotted throughout our modern-day references. If one of these is a solution to a cryptic clue, say, for ACTRESS, then what could be a valid definition? Lady thespian? YES. She works on stage? YES. Thespian? YES. Stage perfomer? YES. One on stage? YES. No problems here. Now if the answer is ACTOR, which is a gender-neutral term, which clues still apply? IMO, only those definitions that are themselves gender-neutral are valid. The others are incorrect as they make the solver look for a gender-specific term or a particular person – there’s not proper equality here. I’ve seen some setters (both male and female) make this mistake with their definitions, possibly to champion their own sex, but it’s not helpful for the solver – it’s purely a misguided indulgence of the setter.
Across | Answers and Clues | Explanations |
1 | SWARMING | |
Section in playground equipment is crowded (8) | ARM inside SWING | |
5 | ARROWS | |
Missiles are not finished before commencement of altercations (6) | (AR)E + ROWS | |
10 | UPPER ATMOSPHERE | |
A supreme prophet reincarnated near space (5,10) | Anagram of A SUPREME PROPHET | |
11 | PRIME MOVER | |
Fussy, the writer returned with accomplished agent who gets things done (5,5) | PRIM + (ME reversed) + OVER | |
12 | FOOD | |
Swamp not providing habitat for large grub (4) | FLOOD minus L | |
14 | BEDPAN | |
It’s used by a patient journalist with page restricted by censorship (6) | (ED + P) inside BAN | |
15 | COCKATOO | |
Male bird took mostly after a parrot (8) | COCK + [(TOO)K after A] | |
16 | REBELLED | |
Attractive woman taken in by red rose (8) | BELLE inside RED | |
19 | INFECT | |
Corrupt court replaced after re-issuing of fine? (6) | CT after anagram of FINE | |
22 | MOOD | |
Made an animal noise sound melancholy (4) | Sounds like MOOED | |
23 | STARVATION | |
Lack of food a camper noticed in depot (10) | (A + RV) inside STATION | |
26 | TAKE INTO ACCOUNT | |
Consider guy grabbing at nice cook awkwardly (4,4,7) | TAUNT outside anagram of AT NICE COOK | |
27 | RED-HOT | |
Section of square dhoti is new (3-3) | squaRE DHOTi | |
28 | STARTERS | |
Leading performer arranged rest for competitors (8) | STAR + anagram of REST | |
Down | Answers and Clues | Explanations |
1 | SLUMP | |
Drop left in oil reservoir (5) | L inside SUMP | |
2 | APPLIED | |
A pope oddly said the wrong thing should be implemented (7) | A + (P)O(P)E + LIED | |
3 | MARKETABLE | |
Assessor reduced furniture in demand (10) | (MARKE)R + TABLE | |
4 | NOTION | |
An idea, not one in operation (6) | NOT + I + ON | |
6 | ROPE | |
Lash sexual molester endlessly? (4) | G(ROPE)R | |
7 | OPEN OUT | |
Unpack one set up in front of ordinary place (4,3) | ONE reversed inside [(O)RDINARY + PUT] | |
8 | SPEEDBOAT | |
Powered vessel passed water snake in strait (9) | (PEED + BOA) inside ST | |
9 | POMELO | |
Soft, round melon – not fully developed fruit (6) | P + O + (MELO)N | |
13 | SKIN CANCER | |
Scan taking into account family record about melanoma (4,6) | (SCAN outside KIN) + REC reversed | |
14 | BAROMETER | |
Watering hole fitted with new sort of remote meteorological equipment (9) | BAR outside anagram of REMOTE | |
17 | BLOCKED | |
Opening to building is secured and barricaded (7) | (B)UILDING + LOCKED | |
18 | ESTATE | |
Property established at back of house (6) | EST + AT + HOUS(E) | |
20 | EPICURE | |
Contents of jug used in recipe excited food lover? (7) | J(U)G inside anagram of RECIPE | |
21 | BREAST | |
End of spear stuck into swine’s flesh (6) | SPEA(R) inside BEAST | |
24 | NOTES | |
Attack retracted report (5) | SET ON reversed | |
25 | BIRO | |
Writer could be restricted in writing about personal experiences (4) | R inside BIO |
One thing for sure (amongst the thousands) about our fascinating & intriguing language, its continuing evolution – by the second. e.g. Can remember a time when Actor WAS gender specific.
“I’m not a fan of an example of the answer being used as a definition, for example, CAT defining PET or HUMBUG defining SWEET. The other way round is fine, of course, but as there are so many things that CAT could be (besides a PET) ”
Is this really what you meant to write? Isn’t the problem that there are so many other things that can be a pet (besides CAT)? “Cat, for example,” is fine as a definition of PET, but also as a definition of BOAT, isn’t it? Or am I crazy?
I get BISLOCKED for 17-across. How do I get rid of the “is”?
I especially enjoyed 8-down, especially the in visible seam in “passed water snake”.
I assume you’ve read Sandy Balfour’s ‘Pretty Girl in Crimson Rose (8)’. 😉
Steve = : ^ )
No, I stand by what I said. To me, although there can be many PETs (maybe not a great example), they fit under the umbrella in such a way that you can be almost certain you have the right answer. “CAT, for example”, is also OK, although maybe the equation isn’t as concrete. But CAT on its own gives the solver no direction.
17dn – quite right, a clumsy mistake.
Re Sandy’s book: Yes, I’ve read it. Never really understood the surface of that clue – it needed improvement.
Yes, you can only really take ‘rose’ as a verb, which loses the misdirection of ‘crimson rose’. Your clue fixes that.